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Once upon a time... no, that's over-rated, lets start again.

There was this little girl who would look out her window every single night looking for a shooting star. And every night she wouldn't find one.

This made the little girl very sad. She decided to look for a shooting star one more time before giving up, and that night she saw her star.

She closed her eyes, and made a wish. She thought it was the most magnificent wish in all the world. When she opened her eyes, she saw the star getting closer and closer. Soon, the star was at her window, so she opened the window for the star, and the star killed her.

The little girl woke up on a cloud. She was wearing a white dress, and she had a tiara. She noticed a harp a ways off. She looked around, and when she knew she was alone, she looked at her feet, sad, and said, 'That wasn't what I wished for.'

The End!
©2008-2009 ~evanescence-rox
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OMG GUYS, isn't that a good story? Please comment!

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So uhm, what happens next?

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" I love Los Angeles. I love Hollywood. They're beautiful. Everybody's plastic, but I love plastic. I want to be plastic. "

- Andy Warhol

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Um... sequel coming soon. I just thought of it, literally right now, so...

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Without suffering there would be no compassion.

Tell that to those who suffer.

- A Walk To Remember
well there's some strange irony for you. three chears for microfiction.
:) Thanks!

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Without suffering there would be no compassion.

Tell that to those who suffer.

- A Walk To Remember
haha, "be carefull what you wish for" yes? lol, XD

nioce :)

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If you do not like me, then please, do not let me stop you from kissing my ass.
:) lol.

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Without suffering there would be no compassion.

Tell that to those who suffer.

- A Walk To Remember
:)

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Without suffering there would be no compassion.

Tell that to those who suffer.

- A Walk To Remember
hahahahaha

i dont know if thats happy or sad.
but i liked it.

i seem to be obsessed with shooting stars lately.

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Life is like a photograph we use the negatives to develope <33

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